1.The country that we took birth in has a great importance in our life. We are linked with it emotionally and culturally. Even though I’m living in Canada, I still have a great connection with my mother land Pakistan. Pakistan has a very important place in my life. It is the place where I took my first breath. All my relatives are living in Pakistan. Also, I have a lot of great memories in Pakistan. I love going to Pakistan and meeting all my relatives.
2.If we look around god has given us many gifts. One those amazing gifts is a family. A family protects and cares about you. My family has a great importance in my life because they are always there for me in my time of trouble. They are very supportive and love me a lot. Whatever we do together my family has a lot of fun doing it.
3.A friend is someone who you can tell your secrets to. A friends is someone you can rely on, I have amazing friends! My friends and I have a lot of fun adventures together. My friends have a great value in my life because we always have an amazing time together and share lots of laughs.
4.On July, 29th 2009 my family and I planned to go to Minneapolis. I had been looking forward to this trip for a very long time. Also, my friends and their families were coming too. In Minneapolis we rode on huge roller coasters, touched sea stars, stayed in a hotel, played hide and seek in the hallways and had a lot of fun. This trip had an importance in my life because it was one of the most fun things I had done in a long time, we were all very sad when it was time to leave.
5.Immigration always has a big effect on people’s lives. New environment, new faces and a new life style. With immigration people lose things and gain things. When I was only five years old my family planned to immigrate to Canada to start a new life. It was a cold, snowy night the first time I stepped in Canada. This step was important and was going to change my life forever.
6.My school is important to me because it is where I get my education. At school I have my teachers that are ideal for me and friends that support me and give me company. School is very important because it is where I will make my career. At school everyday is a new adventure.
7.Everybody remembers their first trip to the circus. The lights, the noise and the smell of the elephant poop. The first time I went to the circus was a great experience for me. I had a great time watching the clowns and the stuntmen. That day I got to ride the elephant around the ring. I will never forget my first trip to the circus.
8.I spend most of my time in my room, it is great place for me to relax after a hard day of school. My room best reflects who I am and has an importance in my life. My room gives me a chance to escape the outside world. My room has everything that I need.
9.Eid is very important to me because it is great time of celebration. On Eid all Muslims wear their new clothes and go for morning prayer at the convention centre. On Eid everybody is very happy for completing a month of fasting. On Eid I get lots of presents but the best part about Eid is all the parties!
10.The day my brother was born was a very important day because I was going to get a new member in my family. Someone that I could play with and someone that I could boss around. My brother always makes me laugh and even though he doesn’t show it, I know my brother cares about me and I care about him. My brother and I always fight but we love each other very much.
2 comments:
I like the stars you used while writing the numbers. It really makes the numbers pop up, and it's easy to read. Your discriptions are really nice, and meaningful. Good job! :D
Goo use of smartboard, and the stars were a good idea, as they make the numbers easily discernible. The descriptions were very well-detailed and personal, although there were a few notable spelling/grammar errors, as well as a few contextual problems. Also, for some of the descriptions, it seems as if the sentences are different ways of saying the same thing, as in the case with 'take birth', 'first breath', etc. Consider being more direct in your descriptions in future. The collage is very attractive though.
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