Hi! yours schematic look really nice! :D One thing I would suggest, though, is that to maybe put a little bit more writing in. But, either than that, amazing job! :D
The diagram itself was VERY well-detailed. I would just recommend using an equally impressive amount of written data. The descriptions themselves were a bit lacking, and could have been a bit more straightforward. Otherwise, good graphics. Also, consider making the JPEG in such a way that the image takes up the entire window, that way it makes it easier to read and more attractive. Something that applies to all of your assignments by the way: edit the HTML to make the images/URL's appear in separate windows. It's just a bit more user-friendly.
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Hi! yours schematic look really nice! :D One thing I would suggest, though, is that to maybe put a little bit more writing in. But, either than that, amazing job! :D
The diagram itself was VERY well-detailed. I would just recommend using an equally impressive amount of written data. The descriptions themselves were a bit lacking, and could have been a bit more straightforward. Otherwise, good graphics. Also, consider making the JPEG in such a way that the image takes up the entire window, that way it makes it easier to read and more attractive. Something that applies to all of your assignments by the way: edit the HTML to make the images/URL's appear in separate windows. It's just a bit more user-friendly.
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